Posts Tagged ‘Written communications’

Blog for Brilliance – another way to experience people

Saturday, April 24th, 2010

A testimonial came to me this week in email. Soon, hard copy evidence of my contribution as a business communication instructor for new entrepreneurs of all ages at this university will arrive. I believe commendation or consolation received in ‘real’ copy still rocks the soul. Don’t you?

The business writing seminar facilitation contract – essentially one noun for each hour of the seminar’s length – came to an end. I opted not to renew.

Two messages to share resulted from my thinking on this:

1. Malcolm Gladwell would have approved of the level of dedication it took to create the course material. I reshaped it from what I inherited when I took over the course 3 clicks of the calendar ago and it drew on my 30 years of hard won field experience. It took hundreds of hours to assemble, refine and deliver and it has surely given10,000 hours of value.

Still finding challenge and satisfaction, I also knew it was time to shape-shift myself and the experience to another level of  expression. As the maxims of  stage and screen go – Timing is everything. Always leave them wanting more.

In this case, I needed more and the natural end of a contract was more than any procrastinator could hope for in timeliness.

2. While I have guided many to ask for testimonials as part of the requisite ’social proof’ of competence or success in delivering results, I had not asked academic or corporate institution for one, personally. We often teach, what me must ourselves learn. I did both.

It was a generous letter, delivered without dithering or delay.

There were comments on my team work, availability to students,  punctuality, sustained accolades from program clients,  dedication to continuous development of myself and my curriculum. It noted how I met the challenge of  delivering an engaging program that managed to address the many personalities that showed up in seminars of  14-30 participants.

What more could I ask for?

I wanted what most creatives want. Recognition of the  intangible. You know. Praise for our unique creative signature. The essence that bubbles up as brilliance, commitment and more. Notice of how invested we are in quality and the desire to relay our craft in such a way that it makes a difference to…. someone, one communication at a time.

The writer did me a great service. The positive input and conventionality gave an assurance to the next institution, organizational team or individual client that they could have in me that most critical commodity-trust.

Reassurance as to my mission on the blue planet and motivation to help mankind creatively would have to come from mini me-inside. Ways now exist to allow others to experience our bits of brilliance outside of direct employment.

Social media has reduced the wait for validation. With all the attention getting options however, still comes the responsibility to deliver value.

Demonstrate your passion or your professional competence via blogs, ezines, Tweets, Facebook entries, LinkedIn and a stunningly diverse myriad of other communication communities and venue choices.

Find me on Facebook, Twitter, LinkedIN as HelenaKaufman and shame me into posting more regularly. We all have great things to say and good writing to craft.

If I can help you to create or to clarify your message so that you deliver it in such a way that your ideas, products or services are understood, drop me a line via the contact form on that tab in the main menu!

Human Imagination, Communication Proved Limitless in Avatar 3D

Saturday, January 16th, 2010

Technology’s unprecedented quality of transmission at super speed and high resolution does not replace the human need for quality communication. Illuminated, with the release of Avatar 3D on one kind of screen, is human longing, love and a sense of higher purpose.

What else is communicated about our world in the pings and bytes?

Some attempt to represent pure human interconnection, human interaction and the intangibles of our souls – emotion, aspiration, the multitude of messages embodied just in our expressive eyes. The message carried by the movie is surely the limitless human imagination in both technology and story. Imagination in human communication has been with us for eons. It may be beamed out to and for us via pixels and prose, infinitely, if the box office success so far is any indication of the thirst, world wide, for a story well told and traveled.

From an ancient intelligence, India, comes an opinion of  a modern blogger. His full comments at: http://world-howiseeit.blogspot.com

EXCERPTED with permission:

I watched the 3D movie AVATAR. The term ‘Avatar’ is not new to the cyber generation and it is not new even to the older generations in India (In Sanskrit it means incarnation). If I need to choose one word to describe the movie, it is ‘Brilliance’.Imaginations in the human mind has no limits, the medium these imaginations could be manifested is the limitation. We are awestruck when these barriers are broken, every time. Jaws dropped when someone made a moving picture then when people could talk in the movie and when they could see it in colors then seeing their favorite cartoon character live and moving, when they could hear to stereo sound and then multiple channel surround sound…Records are set, only to be broken and our species is always in the pursuit to keep bettering things, which is what sets us apart. It is the pursuit to excel and control that makes us adventurous.

Not intending to write a long commentary about the plot, this fictional movie talks of the adventurous attitude added with greed driving humans to not respect the way of life of other alien beings in their land. As always, good wins over evil, in this case, evil being the human kinds.

The hero here is the story telling, I am amazed to see how much technology has enabled us to depict our dreams. There’s been 3-D movies earlier but here’s one I see which has not used this technique to thrill people by scaring us rather make us experience the environment. There are certain scenes where it is hard to resist putting out your hand to feel a beautiful glowing seed that descends down the holy tree. I also see that Hollywood is evolving to think beyond a limited set of sounds made by aliens or huge creatures which have been a predictable standard so far from the Dinos to Godzillas to any other kind of monsters. Here are some barking, tweeting and cawing species.

I think this ‘Avatar’ has set a record of sorts, hard to be beaten immediately but would love to see something that could better it soon, it is all about getting entertained. This movie does not have a special product to sell but like Starbucks and Virgin Atlantic has made it nearly impossible to duplicate the experience it sells on the product/service

HELENA specializes in effective business writing and conversation training for individuals and small groups who wish to improve their workplace and personal communication.

Twitter, Face Book ID is: HelenaKaufman.

Investing in Words N’ More

Monday, June 1st, 2009

‘Where was I last week instead of at my desk blogging?

In a word, investing.

I was seduced, as I often am, by the siren call of learning. With less these days in the form of discretionary funds to invest, I chose to take an asset even more precious than money – time- and spend some of it at a four day, 8 am – 10 pm, educational event called InvestFest.

Any word that begins with IN and ends in FEST now makes me anxious. Due to my tech bugs and last week’s preventative spraying in my building for bed bugs running rampant in other suites, I summoned courage.

At each of the numerous and lengthy sessions I listened and sometimes wrote furiously. The event had all the expected motivation, inspiration, education and selling from the illuminated stage. Infotainment is descriptive word that covers such an entertaining presentation complete with lights, cameras and action.

While there, the ‘currency’ of the material and ideas I was already teaching  in my Business Writing and Communication Courses was affirmed. Only the size, mass crowd energy and the checkbooks at the ready stance of the audience differed from my own class participants.

As writers, we usually execute our daily communications in writing and speaking duties in isolation. Ideally we have control over the soundscape that surrounds us. This event featured people. Lots of them. Standing, shouting, cheering, clapping and buying. Lots of buying.

What is common to both scenarios is the care taken to present the right words. I noted the words and styles most effective in presenting products, service and ideas. What works in business plans and pitches? What will help articulate the power that might help or hinder our success over barriers?

What was true in each category of interest for personal or business success, was the absolute impact words have on us - internally and on our readers and listeners externally.

Consider your words  - your choices, combinations, sequence and the images you choose to express the elegance of your thoughts - with clarity and brevity.

Words are powerful.